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Dol A Dol is what doctors use and you can guess how much pain will be mine. The day she turned her hair bun away the metre rose and I remember it was 13.7 but I was not the one to give up, remember...
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Sivakami, I'm lost. I just can't understand what this is about, don't understand the first few lines in particular. What is a Dol? Who is the "she"? Who is Bruce King? Can you give me a bit of a...
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Dear Sivakami, Yes, these notes are abstruse. But then, I like that in a poem. Judy
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Measure My Pain In Dol A Dol is what doctors use to measure pain and you can guess how much will be mine. The lad in the poem pretends to be in great pain,because the lass has done some internal...
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